From dbdca8a8ebd8e200a9de65a3a9452e75ab7fdd4a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nils Lehnen <30603423+iderex@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Fri, 14 Aug 2026 10:47:55 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Cut the antithesis density on the organisation landing page `profile/README.md` carried six `rather than` figures and one `X, not Y` in 802 words, 8.7 antitheses per 1000, and that density is the tell the fleet text survey measures. This is the most visible page the organisation has, so a reader meets the figure before they meet the product. Four sites are rewritten and two `rather than` figures are kept, the two where the contrast is the information: the design case against the error case, and a preset per deficiency against one blanket mode. The group of three that opened the page is extended to four, so each image now stands for one row of the speed table below it. git grep -cF 'rather than' -- profile/README.md profile/README.md:2 Nothing else moves: no em dash and no en dash enters the file, measured with `git grep -nP '\x{2014}'` and `\x{2013}`, both silent before and after. Answers operations issue 896. Signed-off-by: Nils Lehnen <30603423+iderex@users.noreply.github.com> --- profile/README.md | 26 ++++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/profile/README.md b/profile/README.md index 39055b8..ee99b7f 100644 --- a/profile/README.md +++ b/profile/README.md @@ -9,19 +9,20 @@ Most Jellyfin clients today are web views in a native shell. They work, and they feel like it. A poster wall that stutters as you scroll, a focus change that lands a beat after the key, a spinner sitting inside a tile where the artwork -should be. On a phone it is annoying. On a television, ten feet away with a -remote in your hand, it is the whole experience. +should be, a play button that thinks about it first. On a phone it is annoying. +On a television, ten feet away with a remote in your hand, it is the whole +experience. Flowfin is an attempt at the other thing. One genuinely native client per -platform, sharing a core rather than a codebase, plus the server plugins the -clients need. +platform, each written for its own toolkit on top of a shared core, plus the +server plugins those clients need. Flowfin is not affiliated with the Jellyfin project. ## The part that is not negotiable -Speed is not a feature here, it is the product. So it is written as numbers a -build can miss rather than as an intention: +Speed is not a feature here, it is the product. So it is written down as numbers +a build can miss: | | | |---|---| @@ -30,7 +31,7 @@ build can miss rather than as an intention: | First usable tile, cold start | under 1.2 s | | Press play to first frame | under 2 s | -A build that misses one of these is a failed build, not a slow one. +A build that misses one of these has failed. Two smaller rules follow from the same idea. Nothing shows a spinner inside a tile, and no image arriving late is allowed to shift the layout. And missing @@ -54,8 +55,9 @@ The full system is at [flowfin.dev](https://flowfin.dev). ## Where this actually stands -Early, and the table says so rather than letting you find out after installing. -One plugin ships today. The rest are in build-up, some of them still a shell. +Early. The table below says how early, so nobody has to find that out after +installing. One plugin ships today. The rest are in build-up, some of them still +a shell. | Plugin | What it does | State | |---|---|---| @@ -85,9 +87,9 @@ Open an issue on the repository it belongs to. Bug reports are welcome even when they are only half understood; what a thing did and what you expected is enough to start. -For a security problem, use the private reporting link under Security on the -repository rather than an issue. It is enabled everywhere here, and it keeps the -report between you and the maintainer until there is a fix. +For a security problem, please do not open an issue. Use the private reporting +link under Security on the repository. It is enabled everywhere here, and it +keeps the report between you and the maintainer until there is a fix.
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